beta reading & manuscripts
“It isn’t much good having anything exciting, if you can’t share it with somebody.”
—A. A. Milne, Winnie the Pooh
THE SNACK
~$10
THE HOOK
~$35
THE WHOLE SHEBANG
~$110
CUSTOM FEEDBACK
$0 - $110+
what's included
first impressions - my initial thoughts on the tone, intrigue, and hook
plot summary - in my own words so the author can see what the reader takeaway was
character analysis - individual & interrelationships, character voice
dialogue - narration vs dialogue balance, tagging
genre - was this work true to the specified genre?
any author requested focus or questionnaire
give specific examples from your work that I feel could be improved
in-line comments
genres (fiction only):
Fantasy
Romance
Speculative
Sci-fi
Horror
Thriller
previous work
updated sept 4, 2023
**Please note: all information regarding character names, plot reveals, and other sensitive material has been redacted from the below reader reports to protect the authors' creative rights